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Bug 6934 - Clarification of section title
Summary: Clarification of section title
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: SME Server Documentation
Classification: SME Server Extras
Component: Manual (show other bugs)
Version: 8.0
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: P3 normal
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Assignee: SME Server Docteam
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Reported: 2012-05-24 16:07 CEST by Mark Phillips
Modified: 2013-01-20 14:46 CET (History)
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Description Mark Phillips 2012-05-24 16:07:01 CEST
SME Server:Documentation:Administration Manual:Chapter9
Section 1.2 Groups

In paragraph three, the text segues into a discussion of Windows specific issues. In sentence 5, the text is "Fred Frog is still logged into a Windows PC and...". This could be improved by separating the SME text from the Windows. Break out sentence 5 as a captioned example providing the assumption that a Windows PC is being use in the first sentence.

The sub section "Setting admin rights" only applies to the Windows platform, I think. So the title could be changed to "Setting Windows Admin Rights". Search results would then be more revealing for the user.
Comment 7 chris burnat 2013-01-20 14:46:24 CET
closing
Comment 6 Terry Fage 2013-01-20 14:38:36 CET
Updates have been added to relevant manual http://wiki.contribs.org/SME_Server:Documentation:Administration_Manual:Chapter9#Groups

Close bug
Comment 5 chris burnat 2012-12-12 00:31:11 CET
IN PROGRESS.
Comment 4 chris burnat 2012-12-12 00:30:50 CET
Reopening to move to IN PROGRESS
Need for text in discussion page to be moved to Manual
Comment 3 chris burnat 2012-12-07 20:23:57 CET
Closing.
Comment 2 Terry Fage 2012-12-07 19:12:44 CET
Edit has been placed on discussion page for the relevant manual http://wiki.contribs.org/SME_Server:Documentation:Administration_Manual:Chapter9#Groups and discussion page http://wiki.contribs.org/SME_Server_talk:Documentation:Administration_Manual:Chapter9

If agree close this bug..
Comment 1 Terry Fage 2012-12-06 13:41:30 CET
My reading of para 3 doesn't raise in my mind that this is just a windows issues, however making the sentence that is making an example of being on a windows PC could be changed to a note .

The The sub section "Setting admin rights" however could be changed to "Setting Windows Admin Rights" to highlight and clarify its content.

If this is to be implemented and as this is in a manual it will require someone with the necessary permissions to carry out the suggested edits.